Friday, 11 August 2017


In room five we have been learning about the kakapo so that we could write a report about it. We researched our the kakapo by using links that our teacher had put on a slide for us and then we put the ideas on a padlet. Then we made plans for the writing we were going to go to write. We all made our own report which I then put the writing on a slideshow. Here is my one.


  1. HI Miro, your choice of font size and colour makes your writing very easy to read against the background you've chosen. Your front page really makes me want to read what you have written as the title stands out, and you've included a picture of the kakapo in the background. Well done. I was a little confused by your map as it isn't clear that the larger map is Stewart Island. Also, your arrow gets in the way of the writing. Have you thought about putting the map on a separate slide without any writing? I think it would be much clearer then.

  2. Thank you for the comment and I think I can do that by making in a new slide and then placing the picture on it.


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