Wednesday, 5 April 2017

Lang’s Snowy Drive

In Room 5 we have been learning to describe a setting and introduce a character to the setting. We have been given a picture and we had to describe it and put a character in it. We have each done our own, and here is mine.

Lang’s Snowy Drive   
As the plain  yellow car slowly drove through the snow the road got more slippery as it went. It was winter in America and a very cold one at that. Even though the doors were thick the driver and passenger could still hear the blizzard wind howling outside. Lang was gazing at the snow rushing past the car window as he counted every second until they get there.  Lang was a teenager, fourteen to be precise and he was in college. He was feeling bored because nothing had happened for two whole hours. He was looking forward to go ice skating on the lake and by every second passing he got more and more excited because they would soon  arrive.
                                                                                                                                                               
Free photo Snow Winter Storm ...

2 comments:

  1. Hi my name is Hannah good job o your writing so so good

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  2. Thank you for the comment. What was your favourite part of it?

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