On Monday 28th the year fours to years eights went to Kumara race track to run. If you were a year four you would run one lap, if you were a year five or six you would run two laps, and everybody else ran three laps. When we got back we wrote about what it was like in present tense and described about how we felt and other sensations. Here is my writing:
Hi there, my name is Rio and I am a student in Manukau at Waikowhai School. I really like how you described your track and how you felt . It made me think of when I feel puffed or I win a race. Have you thought about telling us if you made it to zones?If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsriop.blogspot.com/
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